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I may often rate a book with one star I do know I m a nit picking reader, sorry But rarely I go on a heavy handed rant.This is one of those times Pure, unadulterated trash.Awfully written, awfully thought, and awfully delivered It s the author s personal half sexual fantasy and should have remained well closed in her head or trunk There is really nothing good in this, and for once I don t think it s a personal issue No world building, no plot where plot is a woven piece of threads that I may often rate a book with one star I do know I m a nit picking reader, sorry But rarely I go on a heavy handed rant.This is one of those times Pure, unadulterated trash.Awfully written, awfully thought, and awfully delivered It s the author s personal half sexual fantasy and should have remained well closed in her head or trunk There is really nothing good in this, and for once I don t think it s a personal issue No world building, no plot where plot is a woven piece of threads that forms an immage, here you have someone s garbage disposal exploding , no characters again where characters are something different than words on a page , everything moves on the author s wishes and not on its steam Calling a Mary Sue is being extremely nice It s shudder worthy Nothing makes sense and everything happens because the heroine is the only thing that matters so conveniently her rival and bf is lesbian, she can fight people who are way older andexperienced and win, she s the strongest without practicing, she doesn t have to follow protocols, she can do anything This author s writing is so good she can t distinguish sour and sore Please read Cate s for an in depth review DecentI liked this book It s a great concept and the notions behind the world in which they live got my imagination roaring That said, I was still a bit disappointed in the execution of said amazing plot It suffered fromtell than show , bogging down the narrative with long winded explanations that could have been better served spread out or eliminated in favor of dialogue or action Slow burn for harem, medium for individual MMMMF M Cliffhanger Pros Intriguing world building DecentI liked this book It s a great concept and the notions behind the world in which they live got my imagination roaring That said, I was still a bit disappointed in the execution of said amazing plot It suffered fromtell than show , bogging down the narrative with long winded explanations that could have been better served spread out or eliminated in favor of dialogue or action Slow burn for harem, medium for individual MMMMF M Cliffhanger Pros Intriguing world building The idea behind the tale is fantastic Some parts flow very well The twist at the end is quite enjoyable and will mix up the way book 2 progresses Honest female friendships, rare in RH Cons tell vs show FMC comes off as cocky, impulsive and demeaning, rather than strong and self assured The Kings Lack individuality A bit confused on world building obviously different world or dimension,fantasy, yet there is a mention of a TV and reference to men in black No background I absolutely loved this book Isa is such a strong character I lived for her awesome fights and smart mouth comments Her men are definitely not what you expect The story of her past had me on the edge of my seat and gollowing all the twist and turns I can t wait for the next in the series The author did such an amazing job. Could definitely leave this series without another thoughtI struggled to get through this but have sworn off DNFing books for the next month so here we are I found the writing extremely rudimentary something that someone in high school would play with The plot is trope heavy starts off in school, carries on like The Selection and who knows what it will develop into come second book Don t get me wrong there are current trendy tropes that I m selling my soul to getof but what Protec Could definitely leave this series without another thoughtI struggled to get through this but have sworn off DNFing books for the next month so here we are I found the writing extremely rudimentary something that someone in high school would play with The plot is trope heavy starts off in school, carries on like The Selection and who knows what it will develop into come second book Don t get me wrong there are current trendy tropes that I m selling my soul to getof but what Protector is selling, I m not buying I found the plot unrealistic and wasn t able to connect with any of the characters so even they were unable to save it for me She grows up her entire life following her Grandmother s wish of keeping quiet about her heritage and in a hot week less than The pacing was off in this and blows it all to smithereens and barely.blinks.an.eye What And what is the end game to begin with First it was to remain a no one and go back home, then it was to help friend become selected to be one of four Queens to escape an arranged marriage and help beat the bad guys Dark Worlders , but now her friend is a lesbian and she s suddenly in love with four guys she s only just met so now she needs to help with the gate or So many questions As I said previously, the writing itself was elementary Quite a few a lot paragraphs were only paragraphs because the author kept repeating the same sentence or idea but differently with each passing sentence As such, this entire novel probably could ve been halved Author also needs to either not self edit, or hire a better editor The sentence structure and grammar errors were e x t r e m e l y distracting Characters weren t really fleshed out I feel like I still know nothing about the Four Kings save for a couple of sad stories for a couple of them And the characters don t exist without the main protagonist, which makes zero sense when the author delved into some of the Kings POVs The sisterly bond wasn t believable and the Four Kings roles as Kings were also not believable I didn t find that any of her relationships held any depth All the romance fell flat However, was intrigued slightly by Tiran but not enough to want to carry on the series I m honestly stunned that the ratings are so high on this one [ KINDLE ] ♡ Protector ♱ I have a Secret and I m going to tell youI m the last Full blood Witch I m the last Savill RoyalI m the heir to a throne four King s rule the world from I told my secret twice now, to you and my best friend AstraNow it is time to keep that secret again Because if they knew I was still alive, it would mean losing my freedom Maybe even my life Only for me to end up in the wrong place Their placeProtector is the first of a series, it is a reverse harem, this will mean there will be M M scenes and long and steamy sex scenes Reading it at your own risk What is this I mspeechless Written by Russian bots Everything about this book is awful The heroine juvenile, awful dialogue, her internal monologues thoughts sound as though they were extracted from a 13 year old s day dreams The plot has potentialI can t get over the dialogue The dialogue is definitely not for a matUre audience but then there is also extremely adult content at the same time It makes no sense Overall, an awfully written book. I loved this story, Isadora is an awesome heroine and her guy s are all different but equally sexy there s a few mysteries here and they don t all get resolved but in a good way, let me keep reading kind of way The world building was fantastic and epic and well set up for future books I had been in a real book slump but powered through this in a day and really couldn t put it down Smallest of niggles around some conversations in the book not flowing naturally BUT it didn t detract from my I loved this story, Isadora is an awesome heroine and her guy s are all different but equally sexy there s a few mysteries here and they don t all get resolved but in a good way, let me keep reading kind of way The world building was fantastic and epic and well set up for future books I had been in a real book slump but powered through this in a day and really couldn t put it down Smallest of niggles around some conversations in the book not flowing naturally BUT it didn t detract from my enjoyment of the book I can t wait to see what Serena Nova does next slams hands on desk GIVE ME THIS FUCKING BOOK. 3.5 ish stars rounded up, I fell into this story right out the gate Picked it up off Audible and listened to the narration which, I thought, was great Fast paced, plenty of action, Bad A female that doesn t do what she is told Yep I was sucked right in lol Character wise I m not sure really how rounded we have gotten I don t honestly feel like we have gotten to know everyone including our FMC really well yet in this first book hopefully this will improve as the series continues Slow revea 3.5 ish stars rounded up, I fell into this story right out the gate Picked it up off Audible and listened to the narration which, I thought, was great Fast paced, plenty of action, Bad A female that doesn t do what she is told Yep I was sucked right in lol Character wise I m not sure really how rounded we have gotten I don t honestly feel like we have gotten to know everyone including our FMC really well yet in this first book hopefully this will improve as the series continues Slow reveals on the backstory and world building which really usually puts me off a story but honestly I didn t have any problem staying involved I think most of the problem comes from us learning everything as the FMC does, which doesn t make much sense considering she has lived in this world since birth There is also this constant threat that we know about but for some reason can t seem to make anything happen in regards to it, which is a little on the irritating side I was also wishing during the book for a whole lotexplanation in regard to the magical concepts Setting clear parameters when it comes to the abilities gives us as readers an idea of what the characters might be capable of and also allows us to rejoice or celebrate when they break through said barriers Without those we are kind of shooting in the dark.Isadora our FMC is the token bad A, keeping her gifts as a full blood witch hidden because she will be hunted by her families enemies Enemies that in a play for power murdered her ancestors and took the throne She has disguised her self as a protector but as such and in doing her job and protecting her witch friends she sets of a chain of events leading her straight to the palace to compete against other witches for the chance to marry the kings The kings who s families betrayed her own but she can t help but be drawn toI m really interested to see where this is headed Especially with the relationships not being quite developed at this point I do feel like the male harem characters have different and distinct personalities so I feel like this series is sitting on some great potential Serena Nova Discovered Author 2019 not sure if this is a new author on the scene or what but my first impression is amazing Protector is a medium burn paranormal RH and the first in its series It has a kind of Selection from Keira Cass vibe to it obviously with a twist given the paranormal content.Isa is the last Full Blood Savil Royality But she was sworn to secrecy by her grandmother lest she forfeit her life Alas weeks before graduating she tells her best friend Astra what she is Serena Nova Discovered Author 2019 not sure if this is a new author on the scene or what but my first impression is amazing Protector is a medium burn paranormal RH and the first in its series It has a kind of Selection from Keira Cass vibe to it obviously with a twist given the paranormal content.Isa is the last Full Blood Savil Royality But she was sworn to secrecy by her grandmother lest she forfeit her life Alas weeks before graduating she tells her best friend Astra what she is All those years training as a Protector rather than a witch was to keep her identity concealed When Astras life is put in jeopardy Isa risks that sanctity to safe her, this also meant that she was volunteered to join the Selection process to find the next Queen If things could get any worse Isa is instantly attracted to the Kings and they with her She turns their world upside down from the minute she meets them but as all love stories go they will do anything to ensure her safety and that of her friends and family.Obviously as Isa is falling in love the kings have a job to also figure out how to close the gate that is allowing darkness in to their world, what they don t know is that there is a conspiracy within the other houses brewing to keep the gate open Why We are to find out, but they have the best person trying to uncover the truth.Look I like the story I think the characters really fit the plot and I can t wait for the next one